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Andrew's
Poem
First
Grade
I
will make the river flow
So that the wind can blow.
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Richard's
Expository Writing
Third
Grade
I
went for a walk in the forest. "Look" a bird [twet
twet] and there's a deer. What is it running away
from? I smell the tree. They smell like fresh fruit.
A bear, that's what the deer was running away from.
What's that up in the canopy? It's a monkey. It's
time to go up to get away from the bear. There's lot's
of bird's up here. I hear some humming. It's a humming
bird. The leaves are smooth and the bark on the tree
is really bumpy. The bear went away. Let's go
home.
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